Cadence GM
Posts : 42 Join date : 2009-04-29 Age : 41 Location : Work
| Subject: Buy, Sell, Trade: Commentary Sun Jul 19, 2009 11:14 pm | |
| Part 1: - Conrad wrote:
- Rose was a very tragic figure in our campaign and wasn’t given due credit nor justice served on her behalf, she was used, framed and sentenced. She had to watch her own city be devoured from within and died in a tragic carpet bomb all because of the action of another player. Your introduction is perfect and I can’t wait to read how you bring events together as well as describe your fellow players. It’s really interesting to see your writing style and I am impressed with attention to details.
Feel free to remove this post when you continue your story as not to break up the segments. | |
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captcha Vet Player
Posts : 12 Join date : 2009-04-29 Age : 35 Location : The Pitt
| Subject: Re: Buy, Sell, Trade: Commentary Sun Jul 19, 2009 11:53 pm | |
| Yes, poor Rose. Very tough point. I enjoy how you capture Whiskey, exactly how I envisioned him and a lot better than I actually can play him. I look forward for more. | |
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